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雅思写作9月10日社会类高分范文

2016-09-14编辑: 环球教育来自: 环球教育整理

  雅思A类考试中,写作的task2社会类在2016年出现次数比较频繁,更是在最近一场16年9月10日雅思考试大作文中出现,环球教育名师杨亮老师对于9月10日雅思社会话题作文,给出了一篇范文一起来看看吧。

题目:Many countries are trying to improve the standard of living of their people through economic development. However, some people think that many customs and the traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20160910

  范文:In this present-day society, it seems that contradictions always exist between cultural and traditional inheritance and social advancement. Some people, accordingly, suggest that some customs and conventional behavioral norms should not emerge into people’s modern life. Personally, I am completely on the side of what they argue.

  Some ancient moral standards and traditions have formed due to the limited social resources that they could share. An instance in point is that a couple of hundred years ago, three or even four generations of Chinese in a huge family lived under one roof. Consequently, conflicts happened all the time because of generation gaps. The reason why people chose to live together as a large family was because older generations in the ancient society had not ability to make a decent living so that they needed support from their offspring. Definitely, in modern society with a sound welfare system, people are able to live in a small family unit with much more exhilaration.

  Worse, some other customs and traditions came into being because of people’s wrong cognition to the world they were living in. Those traditions might include discriminations to some certain groups of people. In agricultural societies, females were not as productive as males, which led to the fact that men did have upper social status and women were not allowed to do many things that they were supposed to have rights to choose. Undoubtedly, in contemporary societies women have equal rights as men, and thus they can be treated fairly everywhere such as in education and employment.

  To sum up, some traditions and cultures, if not most, are obviously incorrect, and with no doubt we must abandon them. On the other hand, there are also some others that we should pay every effort to pass down generation to generation, which can positively represent our time-honored culture and fine traditions of nations.

  以上就是2016年9月10日雅思A类考试社会类话题大作文高分范文,希望同学们可以对照自己写的作文进行梳理。对于好的句子结构和素材平时注重积累整理。环球教育预祝同学们早日取得雅思高分。

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