对这篇文章进行修改，如下：

　　Of course I think I would have to say that I am not so keen on the weather. To be more precise, I really can’t stand the summer months. This is due to the fact that the temperatures can get as high as 40 degrees so it can be quite uncomfortable if you do not have air conditioning in your house. In addition to this, I am not really that fond of the public transport system. And I guess this is probably because the buses are too old and the seats are really hard, so long journeys are usually pretty bumpy.

　　这两篇文章的内容没有大的变化，但是第二篇可以拿到6分以上的好成绩。究其根本，就是答案更符合“英美人士”的语言习惯，其中不乏连接性的语言结构：Of course I think I would have to say that，This is due to the fact that，In addition to this, And I guess this is probably because。这些语言在语言学中属于“非内容性语言”或者“冗语”，它起到了连接内容，实现过渡的语言功效。我们考生应当掌握。

　　六、“自我更正的次数”

　　这个评分点很容易被很多老师和考生所忽略。一般来讲，自我更正的要求往往和“释义”相混淆。先看一个例子吧。

　　I am thinking about the…um… I forget the name of this food, but it is one of famous traditional food in China. And, it has been for hundred years. Oh, I got its name! It is Go-Believe, a representative cuisine of Tianjin.

　　这句话看似在“自我更正”，其实考生是在进行“释义”。所谓“释义”就是用自己的话来表述一个事物，一件事情。在一个口语答案中如果考生进行了“释义”是可以增加他的高分的几率的。因为考官看到了考生用自己的语言来进行描述事物的本领，体现了现场真实的交流。

　　在评分标准中，如下的“自我更正”是不允许的：

　　I think Mike is an approach man, no, he is an approachable man.

　　这种自我更正是由于考生犯了语法错误所致。和上文的“自我更正”是不一样的。希望引起考生的主意。我们不能因为避免自我更正而去否定“释义”的语言手法。

　　以上我们简要地分析了“流利与连贯”的具体评分要求。大家可以看出来，要想在“流利与连贯”上拿到好成绩，关键就在于我们要掌握适当的联结性短语或者语句。希望各位考生能够在日常备考中逐渐积累。

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